Saturday, August 4, 2007

Slumbered Soul...

I was holding the tide when I loved the motion
I was naïve when I loved to sense
I was quiet when I wanted to yell
I sereneted when I wanted to aggress
I dreamt when I loved to sleep
And…..also ..
I slept when, I loved to dream….
I smiled when I wanted to cry
I complimented when I wanted to grouse
I thought it candid when it was tactful
Why does this soul slumber now?
When there is a keen desire to subsist

14 comments:

Streamstresser said...

Aaaahh.. the complexities and ironies in life... Nice One.. Straight from the heart and intense... loved it...

Unknown said...

Its about tht wounded soul who cant see its wound, all it can feel is pain. Its more profound than deep blue oceans and more vast than this sky.Keep it up.

Anonymous said...

Mast! Keep it up...

Anonymous said...

hey.it wqas da poem which i know came directly from the heart of the wounded soul.it reveals the pain and agony of urs....may be da same which i feel ri8 now away 4rom da loved ones......!we never know where do life leads us to...we alwayz search 4 da better future..but when we reach to dat future..our heart alwayz wanna go to past...where may there is no "better" but still we r "happy" with less better things.....may be this only is da creativity of god for our lives....nobody knows what our next will be....but still we waste our present dreaming about future....in the lap of memories of past!!
-alisha.

Aanshi said...

hey thank you all for the comments..
thanks sujeet, santpreet, akash and AALISHA..

Anonymous said...

"Aanshi" really these girl is something..i have gone through your article and it proves your creativity...but seriously i am not used to all these philosophical or literature world...so i will not comment any thing bad or good about the article..but will always appreciate you for your creativity and to think so deeply in a very early age..nd at the end after reading your article i am big fan of yours although i didnt understand some of the wordings..but still a great job and hope to see yu some of the news channel in future as a celebrity...
"VINOD"

Anonymous said...

its like a cable, completely electrified coming straight from the writers heart reaching upto the readers hearts....simply exceptionnel

Aanshi said...

thanx man..
i m overwhelmed..

Anonymous said...

Hi! Happy Birthday from KIng uncle & Manishasuresh

Anonymous said...

I am myself is King uncle

Unknown said...

beautiful poem aanshi...the constriction of expression very well expressed....love it....!

Aanshi said...

thank u..[:D]

UJ said...

hmmm..seems like u have a keen interest in opposites! no pun intended!! :)
antithesis all the way..nicely done

Aanshi said...

yeah... reactions most of the times contrast the plan.. :P

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